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[Fight For You (Dubstep)]

Amazing

and to the guy below me their is actually a vast number of Dubstep listeners in America especially on the East Coast. But back to the review this is reall good especially since their is vocals it really goes with the mood and genre of the song :) i like the song alot 10/10 5/5

Aydin-Jewelz123 responds:

Glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!

[Gummies]

Well

Lets break this down

Pros:
Your intro was good(not great but good)
I felt the kick went along with this song quite well
The synths used were very good

Cons:
Your lead is good but you made it so it hits the wrong key strokes so it comes off sounding weird.
The way you had the Drums come in was terrible.
Bad EQ

Overall:
4.2

Have a Pad start at the beginning and then fade in the main lead then a epic build up into the song then try and make an epic outro mabye try and make a counter melody for this. Keep up the good work

angelspe3d responds:

I dont know how to EQ at all... like i just dont understand it at all.... im going to work on it thought i know it needs more build ups and i was going for the wierd sound ^_^. Any advice on EQ work? i use FL studio

[Elektrologic (ElectroHouse) V2]

Pretty legit

Been noticing more and more of your music on the portal lately. Your pretty good. I like your music preference in house music. 10/10 5/5

DJ-Qwamii responds:

thanks! :D

[Syst3m Sh0ck [RNG]]

Good job man :)

I like it when good songs get on top and this is one of them. I love the ambient feeling in this although it still maintains its trancey state. I love the lead, the kick EVERYTHING. You got a 5 from me and a dl. 10/10 5/5 keep me posted on your music bra.

Sirdangolot5 responds:

Will do! :D

[HouseMD-[Dj-S]]

i havent forgotten you

you were one of the first artists i heard on NG. where you been haha? Ive started making music myself :P anyway good song bra 10/10 5/5

Sacrafan responds:

Aw, well thats good <3 thanks for remembering :D New song btw, feel free to look :3

[Believe in Miracles {? Demo?}]

mmmmmmm

Pros and cons here. Cons- No lead. Generic synths. Your kick is off beat. Pros- kinda catchy. Get rid of that annoying whistle sound make the kick evry 4th step and try and find a different kick. Make a bass line and change the synth you used for the pad. Try adding in some fx and filters and you should be doing good. 4/10 3/5

mikkim responds:

Okay, from this, the main Mistake I made was that the snare sounds too much like a kick. I actually did have a kick in there that was 4 on floor, but that got drowned out by the much more obvious snare-kick-thing that sounds bad. changing the synth and making the bass line will be simpleish, but what did you mean by whistling sound? Also, the snare is supposed to be off beat, but not like that matters, since it sounds like a kick.

[Elfire - Head Shot]

mmmm Hardstyle

Might want to knocj your kick down a little kinda muffles the lead out. Sounds more hardcorish than hardstyle with the muffled kick. But other than that good job. keep it up. 9/10 5/5

Elfire responds:

Dont blame it on the kick! hes done nothing!

*pats kick*

[i2 - Generico]

I like it :)

love the lead but you could make this so much more BOOM. Keep working on it man this is real great haha. 10/10 5/5

i2abbitz responds:

Yes, I was happy with the explosion of melodies, but I now feel that I should've used a different kick for that part, and a harder bass for the pulse.

[=(:HxC:)=]

not quite

Hardstyle isnt like this. Your kick doesn't hit as hard and the lead you used isnt at all like hardstyle. But keep trying. Try searching for some hardstyle sample packs on the internet to find what kind of kicks im talking about. Hope this helped.3/5 6/10

Daydream-Anatomy responds:

I know, it's only "hardstyle influenced."

Thanks though:3

appreciate it.